Just Once in a Verra Blue Moon
A Highland Gardens Novel
Bk #2
Something unpleasant occurred
to put dark shadows in her eyes. Of that, he was certain. “Why won’t you talk
to me?”
Elspeth twisted to the side and
glanced at him from beneath her lashes. “Is that not what I have been doing?”
“No, you haven’t. You’ve been
skirting whatever upset you.” Finn’s hands curled into fists at his sides. Why
wouldn’t she confide in him?
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~Dawn Marie
l'm wondering the same thing...what's she afraid of...nice job
ReplyDeleteNancy Goldberg Levine
Hi, Nancy. Thanks! She feels obligated to wed the man (Alexander) chosen by her father whom she once believed herself in love with. He's changed. Not in a good way.
DeleteMe, too! Is she afraid of what he'll think of her---or what he'll do to the one(s) who hurt her?
ReplyDeleteShe doesn't want Finn hurt by her powerful betrothed. Thanks for stopping by, Sarah. :)
DeleteHas he done anything to earn her trust?
ReplyDeleteNice 8!
Hi, Frank. Thanks! He's working on it. :)
DeleteI'm definitely intrigued. What is she hiding?
ReplyDeleteI'm glad the snippet intrigued you, PT. She's trying to protect Finn.
DeleteRead this a long time ago, when Dawn was first working on it. Thought it was great then and this snippet reminds me why. Best of luck with this and your current release.
ReplyDeleteThank, BJ! Welcome to the group. :)
DeleteI hope he can persuade her to confide in him but of course then there's no telling what will happen. Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Veronica! More to come. :)
DeleteNothing like being a wee bit frustrated. I hope she opens up and tells him what happened.
ReplyDeleteHi, Karen! Thanks for visiting. Finn and Elspeth have a way to go before she trusts him. :)
DeleteHe sounds like a really nice hero.
ReplyDeleteHi, Elaine! Finn is my favorite hero. At least, this week. :) Thanks for dropping by.
DeleteHe needs to make her feel a little bit more comfortable if he wants to hear what she has to say, clenched fists won't do, hehe.
ReplyDeleteHello, Linda! I imagine she's not happy with his reaction. We'll need to wait and see how this plays out. Thanks for stopping by.
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